Two haiku offerings to syllable god.

Haiku 1

still twilight forest

night brings a diamond blanket

the moon shudders slow

Haiku 2

death comes at twilight

shadows dance in wary peace

light grabs my sad wrist

(These are my first two haiku offerings for the Weekly Writing Challenge)

Here are a few haikus that I enjoyed.

  1. Weekly Writing Challenge: Haiku Catchoo | This, that and the other thing
  2. Weekly Writing Challenge: Haike Catchoo! | thirtythrees
  3. bedtime rhyme | Duo Tell
  4. DPChallenge – Five Haiku | Tea with a Pirate
  5. Winter memories | Paint the world with words
  6. http://thoughtsofalunatic.com/2013/11/25/the-lost-lighthouse-a-haiku/
  7. http://thunderwhenitrains.wordpress.com/2013/11/25/haiku-1/
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25 comments

    1. Thank you!
      The first one’s a pretty straightforward one of a forest at nightfall. The secoond one can be interpreted as the journey of the writer moving towards death and being stopped by light.
      :)

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