Haiku 1
still twilight forest
night brings a diamond blanket
the moon shudders slow
Haiku 2
death comes at twilight
shadows dance in wary peace
light grabs my sad wrist
(These are my first two haiku offerings for the Weekly Writing Challenge)
Here are a few haikus that I enjoyed.
- Weekly Writing Challenge: Haiku Catchoo | This, that and the other thing
- Weekly Writing Challenge: Haike Catchoo! | thirtythrees
- bedtime rhyme | Duo Tell
- DPChallenge – Five Haiku | Tea with a Pirate
- Winter memories | Paint the world with words
- http://thoughtsofalunatic.com/2013/11/25/the-lost-lighthouse-a-haiku/
- http://thunderwhenitrains.wordpress.com/2013/11/25/haiku-1/
dark circles, etc 
Love the first, wondering why “sad wrist” in the second. I’m stumped. Enjoyed the read, though. Thanks.
Well, I pictured this light which grabs the writer by the wrist and stops her from going towards death.
Thank you! :)
Ah, I like that now I understand. Thanks for taking the time. Warmly, Brenda
Thank you for reading. :)
My pleasure. :-)
Great images. Thanks for the mention, too.
janet
Thank you, and you are muchly welcome. :)
wow, so good, looks like we had the same thought line for a moment (for my first and your second) :D
Oh lovely!
I guess we should avoid the great minds, etc cliche. :D
haha, that might be for the best, if it happens to be true oh well. ;)
Interesting constructions. Could you derive some visuals from the words?
Shakti
Thank you!
The first one’s a pretty straightforward one of a forest at nightfall. The secoond one can be interpreted as the journey of the writer moving towards death and being stopped by light.
:)